0sβ2s (HOOK β FACE FIRST) POV flashlight already LOCKED on a MASSIVE HIPPO FACE right beside a small boat. Too close. Eyes reflecting hard. Water dripping off its mouth. Someone screams: βBACK! BACK! BACK!β The hippo SNAPS forward instantly β jaws filling frame. Camera jerks violently. 2sβ5s Camera falls sideways into the boat. Flashlight drops β spinning beam chaos. Light flashes: metal railing water splashing in someone slipping Screams overlapping: βMOVE! MOVE!β The boat rocks violently. 5sβ8s (SCRAMBLE β NO CONTROL) Camera grabs the flashlight again β shaky beam. Points toward water β Nothing there. Just ripples. Too quiet for half a second. Heavy breathing. 8sβ11s (SECOND PROXIMITY SHOCK) Beam swings right β HIPPO already THERE again, closer than before. Mouth open. Someone screams right next to camera: βITβS RIGHT HERE!β Water blasts up as it surges forward. Light flickers from the splash. 11sβ14s (CHAOS PEAK) Camera gets knocked backward β half off the boat. Flashlight beam now angled low across water. We see: thrashing water part of the head nothing fully clear Sound carries it: SPLASHES + SCREAMS + WOOD HITTING WATER 14sβ15s (PAYOFF) Flashlight flickers onceβ¦ Then cuts out. Complete darkness. One final HEAVY SPLASH right next to camera. Cut. Key Visual Hook Hippo face already in flashlight beam in frame one β no search, no buildup β immediate attack.
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