0sβ2s (HOOK β FIRST ATTACK) Camera already outside on a wooden porch deck. A MASSIVE HIPPO lunges up from the water edge β jaws snapping inches from someone backing away. Wood shakes violently. Camera jerks sideways β too close. 2sβ5s The person stumbles across the porch, trying to reach the door. The hippo surges forward again β then suddenly DROPS back into the water. Gone. Too fast. Thatβs worse. 5sβ8s (FALSE ESCAPE) Camera rushes toward the door. Grabs handle β stuck for half a second. Inside visible through gaps β safe space. Behind β Water is moving again. Fast. 8sβ11s (BREACH FROM BELOW) Before the door fully opens β FLOOR beneath porch BULGES upward. Wood cracks. Water sprays through gaps. A huge shape pushes from below β lifting part of the structure. Camera loses footing. 11sβ14s (SECOND ATTACK β FULL COMMIT) The hippo BURSTS upward through the porch boards β full head and shoulders breaking through. Wood explodes. Camera gets thrown backward toward edge. The attack is upward now β not from front. 14sβ15s (PAYOFF) Camera falls off the porch into muddy water. Submerged for a split second. Brown chaos. Cut. Key Visual Hook A hippo already lunging onto the porch in frame one, followed by it disappearing and attacking again from BELOW.
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